16 minutes till work

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    16 minutes till work
    16 minutes till work
    i've vowed a postive attitude
    i will polish copper counter tops with gusto
    count the bank attentively
    smile at customers with genuine warmth
    bid hello to my fellow workers honestly with a light heart

    i'd have to do it anyways might as well do it right

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    mamasan commented on 16 minutes till work

    11-24-2009

    You have a great style in all your poems and you touch the nitty gritty of life.....all your poems.....the ones I read so far.....could be newsworthy on the ten o'clodk news. Bet, you would make a good journalist........
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    brenda

    11/25/2009

    thanks for all your comments, you're really nice to take the time and write a lot of feedback.

    jak commented on 16 minutes till work

    07-13-2009

    warm and light not dark like some of your other ones. nice
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    Vincent commented on 16 minutes till work

    01-17-2009

    How true, smiles Vincent
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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