2 Young Girls Love

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  • jerseycrtz
  • Your the one for me, and I'm the one for you, take the both of us and we're the perfect two. <3

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I wrote this poem with my friend LizaT11. she is an amazing poet and you can look up her poems by going to www.originalpoetry.com/LizaT1. Thx!

2 Young Girls Love

Do you like me?
I wish I knew
Could you like me?
I think you do
if only you could see what I feel
and hear my cry
out to you
I wish you could look inside my heart
and see the hole
From where you took a piece
Sometimes I wonder
What could happen
If you were ever brave enough
You never know how it feels to be a girl
until you have your heart broken
by someone you love
You never know what it feels like to be in love
until you lose the one you love
You never know what it means to be truthful
Until you break the trust
And get your heart broken
I wish I could open up to you
 and show you my battered heart
 and scream all night
 to tell you to come back to me
because if you were in my position
you would want the attention
When you look in my eyes
I hope you don't see the tears
My eyes are getting redder
with love
Tears fall throughout the night
As I sit and think of you
I never wanted you to see my this way
But I guess this is how it is
And now you understand...
So now you see the burning love
we both have in our hearts
We can now express this through different arts

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gallaxy commented on 2 Young Girls Love

03-11-2010

Very well constucted. believe it or not my fellow poet, but some guys go throu the same things. I know this for a fact.....

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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