2Submission

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    2Submission

    Coy and slow soothing wounds from
    silks of flame where passion burned,
    gentle kisses tend to pains, left fresh
    and raw what submission earned,
    in a fire side game, of masquerade.
    ...
    Heat warms with a gentle touch
    a sacred space in the den of love.
    Snowy embers in the midnight sky
    surrounded my body and I was
    tempted inside.
    Desire won to my want of more so
    I traded my soul and opened the door.
    A Shadow lay on the sunken floor and
    a scent of musk from a glowing coal
    drew me near... as his games began.
    "...take the mask, come play with me..."
    His whisper challenges my reality so
    to reward my body the journeys task,
    I opened my legs as the Dragon asked...
    Flames echo in my eyes just then and I
    burn inside from the motion of his tongue.
    A pain~filled pleasure as my body jolts,
    Wet darts thrust as the lightening bolts,
    And I beg to cum grinding at my hips
    to the rhythmic beat of his fiery lips...
    "... baby please..." a whisper in broken wisps,
    "...You're filling me..." a push of wanting hips.
    Noooooo...Don't stop!
    breathless, reaching
    stop, don't stop! baby,
    deep and with feeling,
    please
    burn away
    this wet in me
    hot and in need
    of your fire and begging
    in desire I admit!
    I want and I want to submit!
    Coy and slow soothing wounds from
    silks of flame where passion burned,
    gentle kisses tend to pains, left fresh
    and raw what submission earned,
    in a fire side game, of masquerade.
    ...
    Heat warms with a gentle touch
    a sacred space in the den of love.
    Snowy embers in the midnight sky
    surrounded my body and I was
    tempted inside.
    Desire won to my want of more so
    I traded my soul and opened the door.
    A Shadow lay on the sunken floor and
    a scent of musk from a glowing coal
    drew me near... as his games began.
    "...take the mask, come play with me..."
    His whisper challenges my reality so
    to reward my body the journeys task,
    I opened my legs as the Dragon asked...
    Flames echo in my eyes just then and I
    burn inside from the motion of his tongue.
    A pain~filled pleasure as my body jolts,
    Wet darts thrust as the lightening bolts,
    And I beg to cum grinding at my hips
    to the rhythmic beat of his fiery lips...
    "... baby please..." a whisper in broken wisps,
    "...You're filling me..." a push of wanting hips.
    Noooooo...Don't stop!
    breathless, reaching
    stop, don't stop! baby,
    deep and with feeling,
    please
    burn away
    this wet in me
    hot and in need
    of your fire and begging
    in desire I admit!
    I want and I want to submit!

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    dahlusion commented on 2Submission

    01-21-2010

    "this wet in me hot and in need of your fire and begging" I am gasping in erotic verse.

    IzzyGumbo

    01/21/2010

    dahlusion, I appreciate your visit and kind comment. Looking forward to visiting your way also :)

    hoth2o commented on 2Submission

    01-21-2010

    Izzy, submission never sounded so erotic, so fulfilling, and you my friend have been dearly missed...

    IzzyGumbo

    01/21/2010

    hoth2o, I'm sorry I've been away but I've moved house and am finally settled. Very busy to do such a thing at holidays but.. it's done so now I have time again to catch up my reading. Looking forward to visiting your new works :)

    Stryx commented on 2Submission

    01-10-2010

    Sensual and errotic and well written - I became a voyeur without trying.

    IzzyGumbo

    01/21/2010

    I decided that this form of writing is deliciously difficult :)

    danmartyjake1 commented on 2Submission

    01-04-2010

    Great erotic write! I enjoyed this. It's always better when you want to be there!

    IzzyGumbo

    01/21/2010

    lol.. yes it is my friend :) I appreciate your reading time. looking forward to reading your art also.

    RJK commented on 2Submission

    12-12-2009

    I can imagin a cabin in a little mountain nook full of snow with a bright blue mind night sky. And a whole lot of fun!

    IzzyGumbo

    01/21/2010

    A whole lot of fun :)) x

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