5 Feet Tall

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    Some of the biggest hearts you can ever know comes out of the smallest bodies....

    5 Feet Tall

    5 Feet Tall
    By Shericka Murphy

    He said she got brown skin....
    Her body....Thin
    A mind that you can loose your mind in
    And then...the love begins

    He said she got hair like the night....
    Her grip....Tight
    A figure so smokin' it'll get you high as a kite
    And then...She's outta site

    He says she got eyes like a storm....
    Her touch....warm
    Great movement and great form
    And her thoughts get around you...and swarm

    He says she got tears that are sweet....
    Her build....Petite
    It's her soul he wants to greet
    And she keeps her body...on her feet

    He say she got lips like candy....
    A kiss....Thats handy
    He even said that it was dandy
    And then he sipped...my brandy

    He told me that she got a smile like the sun....
    His frowning....Done
    And then the room spun
    And her love...weighed a ton

    And then he mentioned that she was just 5 feet tall....
    5 feet....And thats all
    And if I can recall...
    I've never had far to fall....


    LOL.....

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    Fadedayz commented on 5 Feet Tall

    04-14-2010

    Wow you humble me with how well this flows lol Luv it :D
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    MizBoonie

    04/14/2010

    Thanks a lot! :)

    ApaqRasgirl commented on 5 Feet Tall

    03-16-2010

    loved this a lot. very well written. thanks for sharing love Asha
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    MalikPeterson commented on 5 Feet Tall

    03-16-2010

    this is an interesting write. I like the flow and the rhythm to it. It also proves that big things often come in small packages lol :)
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