Coffee Time

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Coffee Time

Coffee time
cannot ryhme
until caffiene
enters the scene
a donut too
sweet, full of goo
not so nutritious
but so delicious
I'm ready to go
shovel the snow

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Olan01 commented on Coffee Time

05-28-2010

Well, all us coffee and donut addicts like this one, eh? Every morning I wake up and grind beans to make my pot of coffee for the day. The aroma is... well...no words to discribes how savory it is to the orfactory senses. The only thing I would change would be to omit "the" in the last line, but that is me.

StandingBear commented on Coffee Time

03-02-2010

I have to have my morning java come hell or high water. An astounding .. highly entertaining write! SBear

dahlusion commented on Coffee Time

03-02-2010

Oh, my...I love that caffeine rush that jolts me into writing words that I would never say out loud. Cute write.

MindNumbing commented on Coffee Time

03-01-2010

This is too much fun! I'm a coffee fanatic so I can absolutely relate... thanks for the light and breezy read this morning :)

randomgal commented on Coffee Time

02-27-2010

so simple, so just what is needed, so good I like the simplicityof it, I smell the coffee, I taste the donut.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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