A BEAUTFUL LIFE

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    A BEAUTFUL LIFE


    5                            A BEAUTIFUL LIFE

    SITTING AROUND TALKING TO THE WIFE
    LOOKING AT HER LAUGHTER AND SMILE THAT'S NICE
    I LOVE HER SO I WOULD MARRY HER TWICE
    YES WE HAVE A NICE LIFE
    WE ENJOY OUR KID WHEN THEY COME HOME
    EVEN THO THEY ALL ARE GROWN
    YES WE HAVE A LOT OF GRAND
    ALWAYS WANT TO LEND A HAND
    SETTING AROUND EATING SUNDAY DINNER TOGETHER
    IN SOUTH CAROLINA ENJOYING THE WEATHER
    TOGETHER FOR 34 YEARS
    THERE HAVE BEEN MANY JOY AND MANY TEARS
    ALL AND ALL LIFE IS GOOD
    LOVING EACH OTHER AS WE SHOULD
    LOOKING FORWARD TO ANOTHER DAY
    HOLDING HAND AS WE PRAY
    YES THAT IS SO NICE
    BECAUSE WE HAVE A WONDERFUL LIFE

    WRITTEN BY CLIFTON DURANT

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    Paolo commented on A BEAUTFUL LIFE

    12-04-2009

    To men this appears to be more narrative than poetry, despite the rhymes. Writing a poem like this is extremely difficult to get right. It is easy to lose someone in the phrasing. I got lost with this phrase, "YES WE HAVE A LOT OF GRAND". It is a lovey sentiment. I mean I love being married but this needs, to my way of thinking a re-write.

    countrypoet commented on A BEAUTFUL LIFE

    11-12-2009

    This is a beautiful and moving tribute to your wife and family.You are a very lucky man to have been given such a good life and so many blessings.Thank you for sharing these beautiful poem.

    BringMeBullets commented on A BEAUTFUL LIFE

    11-03-2009

    This is a really nice poem. It's great that you made it ryhme. I admire that. Great poem.

    happy63 commented on A BEAUTFUL LIFE

    10-26-2009

    It is nice to see someone to love there wife, so much that you would think to write a poem, for her and share it with others. may god keep you and her for many more years.

    danmartyjake1 commented on A BEAUTFUL LIFE

    10-19-2009

    Beautiful description of how life really should be lived. Thanks for sharing it.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    cliftondurant’s Poems (28)

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    THE BEST IS YET TO COME 4
    THE UNTHINKABLE 4
    THE ENTER ME 19
    IN THE MIST OF THE STORM 8
    THE MASTER WING 4
    IN THE STILL OF THE NIGHT 7
    MY BROTHER AND ME 10
    IF YOU DON'T KNOW 8
    IN LOVE WITH MYSELF 17
    OCEAN VEIW 14
    EVERYONE NEED LOVE 18
    THESE TIME 18
    LIVING WITH A GHOST 24
    LIFE WAY 12
    THE FAST LANE 21
    A BEAUTFUL LIFE 28
    THE SPECIAL ONE 23
    BE A PRAYER NOT A PLAYER 31
    LOVE 24
    RESCUE ME 31
    DEATH 39
    Don't be stress 37
    inspirational 22
    I OVER COME 22
    The Beauty of Love 35
    THE JOY OF LIFE 22
    BELEIVE 21
    JESUS IS RISEN 33