A Composition of Sin

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A Composition of Sin

Composition of Sin

she barely raises her eyes
as my fingertips flutter by
strumming her guitar
her long taut body
over the years ive become
so aware
of her every mood
her every emotion
the rude and the devotion
come to love her
come to hate her
taste the copper in her mouth
and the beauty in her soul
the rain we collect
and drink from the same bowl
the curve of her lips
the set of her hips
long loving everlasting admiration
clock on my wrist
moving with elation
our lives lived in music
appetite intrinsic
flowing pomegranate tresses
endless saturday night dresses
pale fruitful skin
a composition of sin

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SavVySam commented on A Composition of Sin

11-20-2009

Deeply sensual comparisons drawn here in learning/playing a lover, very well done, or undone as the case may be..;`) A steamy "10" !

JellyBeanPuddin commented on A Composition of Sin

08-26-2009

Absolutely beautiful... i'm speechless... and typeless.lol.

latinangel commented on A Composition of Sin

07-07-2009

I love the musical vibe of this poem. It is a lovely erotic composition. I love these lines the rain we collect and drink from the same bowl the curve of her lips the set of her hips so cool thank you so much for sharing with me. Latin Angel

jademelissa74 commented on A Composition of Sin

06-21-2009

The erotic nature of this poem is very intriguing. I love the way that you describe the passion felt for the mate that exists within your soul . It leaves the reader wanting more of the story, more of the appetite, more of the composition of sin! Outstanding Job!

AmadeusEx

06/29/2009

my sensual side in this one, describes a specific person and how our relationship grew and changed over a period of time...thank you for all your comments jade

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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