A Forgotten Friend

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    IMPORTANT!!!! I DO NOT OWN THE FIRST TWO STANZAS! I got them from a book and added onto it. I unearthed this from a long time ago, just decided to post it.

    A Forgotten Friend

     She sees the world
    through others' eyes
    The only colors
    black and white.

    She looks upon
    a shattered youth
    The mirror of
    a broken truth.

    Beauty and poise
    grace and care,
    She gently waltzes
    through the air.

    A goddess perhaps,
    Or a friend from a hidden past.

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    kdarcy commented on A Forgotten Friend

    10-23-2010

    " The mirror of a broken truth ", great line to a good work, thanks for sharing, be well k
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    abuelita1 commented on A Forgotten Friend

    10-23-2010

    Very nice write. Enjoyed it. Made me smile.......and smile again. Thanks for sharing.
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    Kanicki commented on A Forgotten Friend

    10-17-2010

    Good write enjoy the read....beautiful. Peace and Light.
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    Troy commented on A Forgotten Friend

    08-19-2010

    a very good write lyerical and enchanting my thanks for sharing
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    ApaqRasgirl commented on A Forgotten Friend

    08-19-2010

    that was a beautiful write dear. loved the way your words told the reflected truth..........great write.......love asha
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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