A Life Not My Own

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    A Life Not My Own

    A Life Not My Own

    Scott Wright
    10:50 A.M. 6/1/07


    I’ve lived a life without control
    Everyday would be new without knowledge of what to do,
    Until I started to take control
    Nothing I did came from my soul,
    When everything finally starts to go right
    Everyone seems to want to fight,
    I don’t know what to do
    I don’t know what went wrong
    The only thing I know
    Is the truth in this song.
    Everything has went awry
    And I don’t want to lose my life
    No matter what I say
    People always seem to hate
    No matter what I do
    I always seem to lose.
    Everything is out of control
    And I am too confused,
    If God leaves my soul
    I will surely be consumed.
    I don’t want to live a life
    A life that’s not my own,
    A life where others take control
    And never let it go,
    A life without goals
    A life without dreams
    A life I can’t live
    A Life Not My Own.

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    hdmac commented on A Life Not My Own

    07-27-2009

    This poem is depressing to say the least, but if it's true it is a good use of words.

    Chi commented on A Life Not My Own

    02-10-2009

    nice ........dont loose control of the poetry. Chi

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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