A Lonely Pain

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A Lonely Pain

Alone and never together.
Broken into pieces and falling to the ground. Shattered and dripping.
Blood runs down and tears are shed.
Love is death,
Pain is forever.

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Helios commented on A Lonely Pain

08-04-2009

Well, I suppose that the feeling of love can seem that way [sometimes]. Please remember that pain that can seem permanent, is not always so. This is just my opinion because I do not know want you have been through, but thank-you for the modern verses.

writingislove

08/08/2009

I know that it is not permanent. But it sure does feel like that sometimes. You are welcome and tthank you.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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