A love story

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the debut for book 2 will be soon. here's the title poem to the book... verbal enslavement: A love story

A love story

This whole time it's always been, 

You.

And I was creating an illusion in the others,

That was almost the truth.

But who would of knew,

Not letting the torch die,

Eventually,

You would see your way through.

Keeping a whisper in the atomsphere,

Would somehow affect the future.

None of the rest would do.

Broken hearts and salted teardrops along heavy footsteps,

Should be my proof.

A teardrop just fell from the memory.

Where have I been?

I've been waiting for the chance to finally have what I have always wanted.

The dream.

Look into my soul.

See what I mean.

See this beautiful reality.

Come and rescue me.

I believe,

O God I believe.

And that's deep.

That we could be.

A love story.

A story told to generations soon to come.

I'm here.

I'm done.

There was always a blessing in our union.

But we delayed.

I strayed.

Give me the oppurtunity

And I promise I'll repay.

Every single second of every single day,

That my presence wasn't around.

Every single broken promise and bitter tear,

The circles you were forced to walk,

The oceans were we almost drowned.

And I'm so sorry.

That,

In the beginning,

I didn't listen to my heart.

By the way,

You were right.

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Chi commented on A love story

03-01-2013

Very Nice my brother (smile)..........bra·vis·si·mo!.... wink.

TilMyLastBreath commented on A love story

06-25-2011

HEY Bro!!! Been a very long time but I can see you havent lost your touch when you put pen to paper, great work!!! I need to post my new stuff, still waiting for my Love to return but I fear she never will. Take Care bro, I drop you a line when I get back to the states from here. (middle east/ in the middle of another deployment). George

janetdawson commented on A love story

03-26-2011

You never disappoint me, I love this and the woman who wrote this is very lucky and bless to have someone as talented as you. :-)

Realistic commented on A love story

02-02-2011

Beautifull as always B. This in paticular makes me think about many things, takes me back, takes into the unknown of the what if's of wonderland... If you were to ever stop sharing your talent with us on here and with the world, you would be doing more of an injustice than you would ever know. U are greatly missed, we must all do what is right as the Word says to him that knows to do right and does it not, to him it is sin...

cdeluhery87 commented on A love story

01-15-2011

I am so happy for you and all the success your having babe, and with poems like these youll go far....havent read a new one in a while and once again this is magnifico! This one needs audio would love to hear your voice, hear each pause and hit of each line....great job = )

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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