A Love that Blossomed (Shakespearian Sonnet)

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    A Love that Blossomed (Shakespearian Sonnet)

     We were best friends before we felt the love
    Which came as unexpected rain or shine
    And took our air as done to skies above
    In sudden storm of heavenly design.

    We were relaxing under June’s full moon
    Inhaling night’s aromas and lovely sound
    When our hands met and hearts caused us to swoon
    With great delight what we ne’er sought we found.

    What joy the moment brought in things unsaid
    The times to then in flashback gave their say
    Of written love -- which writers never read
    Until the final--most important day…

    The oath we made we daily reminisce:
    Our love was stamped with a delightful kiss.

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    Springsize commented on A Love that Blossomed (Shakespearian Sonnet)

    07-05-2010

    Hi again leslieAlexis, I see Aria has already pointed out Line 6, with should have one less accent.. Your message is a pleasant look of love, being noticed in innocence and savored until commitment serves as the binding of each experience after... really nice view of how love Should be for everyone... discovered, enjoyed and retained....
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    WordSlinger commented on A Love that Blossomed (Shakespearian Sonnet)

    06-02-2010

    ok the apostrpohes are not needed to me, the is no need to claim ownership, and it's not signaling the is word, ok a comma, after aoromas, and met. Truly a heartfelt poem, A ty WS
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