A Love's Debt

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    A Love's Debt

    I L-O-V-E U, is the usual proclimation,
    in most amourous situations. But from such a lovely
    utterance, comes much responsibility, to have, to
    hold and to be true. Honesty and fairness, and the
    Ohhh Yeah(ness) of always being true!

    How many people you know have really paid their love debt fully?


    Is it the baby daddy that always owes child support
    in different area family courts that hampers him in his
    love debt to sons and daughters, or maybe it’s the
    gangbanger who just got caught avenging his dead
    homie’s honor by taking a brother from another colors’
    life….denying him also the right to pay his love’s debt through
    the currency of his life!

    How many people you know have really paid their love debt fully?

    Or maybe it’s a gold-digger / playaz song, always sung
    with soul and an unquenched love for material attachments,
    but the ly collateral offered is spiritual detachment, with
    promises of future spiritual reconnection. A life of love in
    wanting or needing those things that appear real fancy!

    How many people you know have really paid their love debt fully?

    Yet still its my own personal need to always be in the right,
    yeah that is my love need and man forget that other brother
    over there who doesn’t see my light for his own tendency
    towards his own love rights to be equally as bright. Look at
    em’ over there, viewing my love rights with contempt and
    impunity, cuz from where he is viewing, over here looks
    like night! Uh, uh that means darkness, the total absence
    of light, in his mind he is right.

    How many people you know have really paid their love debt fully?

    How about the cheating spouse, who in a sudden fit of jealous
    rage offs the competition by twelve gauge, he was just trying
    to collect what he felt is owed on what love debt fooled him into believing he owned. Its called unrequited Love! While the newspapers headline it as a Lover’s Triangle….

    How many people you know have really paid their love debt fully?

    Even biblical(ly), I am told that Supreme Spirit came into man,
    to settle and pay a timeless love debt….only to be shunned,
    and denied , he still put up blood to settle love’s debt. How
    come believers forget, and beg for favors or just a down payment,
    on what is owed in a love’s debt!

    How many people you know have really paid their love debt fully?

    Love costs much, and maims many but life without love is
    worst than a trillion dollar debt, without a payment plan and no
    incoming check to help settle love’s debt!

    How many people you know have really paid their love debt fully?

    Who are love’s debt collectors is a simple yet difficult answer….
    To LOVE THYSELF in All things and All Times or else Reap
    what ye Sow is another term called Love’s Debt!

    How many people you know have really paid their love debt fully?

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    optimistic commented on A Love's Debt

    08-19-2009

    THis you know man is outstanding your work I really enjoy I have to read more, you point out the sense of life that other do not see and strikes them with creative writing well done my friend well done.

    SILKYTWEED

    08/19/2009

    Wow thanks again, I'm honored that you took the time to read this piece and blessed by your comments and encouragement! ONE

    FlowerGirl commented on A Love's Debt

    06-21-2009

    This Is Quite Interesting! As, I Finished down The Page To Very Last Word, All I Could Say...Was Wow! This Is Deep! Things That Make You Go Hum...........! I Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Poems! A very Good Write!

    SILKYTWEED

    06/23/2009

    Thank you FlowerGirl, it pleases me to know that you enjoyed this Write!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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