A Playa's Creed

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Casanova's Rhythm in Time....

A Playa's Creed

Sweetest  sweet  concubine of  mine
Sipping  on  this  wine  we  refine  time
Resigning  to  potion  of  this   rocking  motion
Exchanging  glimpses  of  rain  falling  on  oceans
Heated   by  the  wonder  of  who  will  outlast  last
Not  ready  to  stop  eating,  continuing  to  move  fast
Blasting  into  the  convenience  in  storing,  a-more-ay
Leaving  the  moment  this  picture  becomes  boring
Showing  hands  of  love,  but  never  holding
Folding  tables  and  collapsible  beds  for  shoring
Exchanging  moods  of  horniness  provoking  poking
Shouts  and  Call  backs  for  A’cappella   renditioning
Leg,  thigh,  leg,  or  face  to  toe,  toe  to  face  positioning
Taking  in  and  subcumbing  to  a  steady  auditioning
Love  lasts  for  as  long  as  we  are   blind  to  varieties
Graphics  seen  inbetween  third  eye’s  screening
Making  sure  nothing  comes  between  a  good  ole’ gaming
Treasure  is  lost  and  found  in  re-enacting   lost  pleasuring
Measuring  the  sizes  and  fluidity  by  sexual  activities
Never  be-fittingly  belonging  to  a  true  mating, in  linking
To  busy  quick  fixing  up  temporary  co-habitation  fostering
We  chase  and  trail  but  can  never  be  caught,  until
Days  are  fraught  in  broken  sails  or  abilities  to  pull
Carrying  dead  weight  in  tow  of   too  many  episodes
Leaving  us  old  and   unable  to  trust,  the  gist  of   “us”
Old  and  Play’d  like  games  once  sold,  and  used 
Parts  now  missing,  heart’s  reacting  now  ain’t  skipping
Beating  on  old   flames   but  burned  by  present  conditioning
Blues  in   drumbeats  from  heart’s  failed  grades….incomplete
Thinking  all  it  do  was  to  add  the  taking  of  much  love
Forgetting  the  be-attitudes  of  much  given….is  a  requiring
Sang  from  trumpets  in  harmonicas,  crying  and  questioning
Realized  to  late  that  the  best  love  is  a  love  actuality
Left  out  of  date,  all  expiring ,  sour  from  a  wilted  flower
The  playa’s  creed,  done  left  me  lonesome
The  playa’s  creed,  done  increased  my  enemies
Game  respects  game,  is  what  I  use  to  spit
Now  I’m  play’d  out,  and  left  without  happy  endings
So  all   I  can  do  is  to  keep  on  pretending,  
no  debt ,  In  this  playa’s  ode

Sweetest sweet concubine of mine

Sipping on this wine we refine time

Resigning to potion of this rocking motion

Exchanging glimpses of rain falling on oceans

Heated by the wonder of who will outlast last

Not ready to stop eating, continuing to move fast

Blasting into the convenience in storing, a-more-ay

Leaving the moment this picture becomes boring

 

Showing hands of love, but never holding

Folding tables and collapsible beds for shoring

Exchanging moods of horniness provoking poking

Shouts and Call backs for A’cappella renditioning

Leg, thigh, leg, or face to toe, toe to face positioning

Taking in and subcumbing to a steady auditioning

Love lasts for as long as we are blind to varieties

 

Graphics seen inbetween third eye’s screening

Making sure nothing comes between a good ole’ gaming

Treasure is lost and found in re-enacting lost pleasuring

Measuring the sizes and fluidity by sexual activities

Never be-fittingly belonging to a true mating, in linking

To busy quick fixing up temporary co-habitation fostering

 

We chase and trail but can never be caught, until

Days are fraught in broken sails or abilities to pull

Carrying dead weight in tow of too many episodes

Leaving us old and unable to trust, the gist of “us”

Old and Play’d like games once sold, and used

Parts now missing, heart’s reacting now ain’t skipping

Beating on old flames but burned by present conditioning

Blues in drumbeats from heart’s failed grades….incomplete

 

Thinking all it do was to add the taking of much love

Forgetting the be-attitudes of much given….is a requiring

Sang from trumpets in harmonicas, crying and questioning

Realized to late that the best love is a love actuality

Left out of date, all expiring , sour from a wilted flower

 

The playa’s creed, done left me lonesome

The playa’s creed, done increased my enemies

Game respects game, is what I use to spit

Now I’m play’d out, and left without happy endings

So all I can do is to keep on pretending,

no debt , In this playa’s ode

 

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shakeme4life commented on A Playa's Creed

11-30-2010

Yet another facinating poem , this one a little more raw , street .

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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