A prayer...

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    A prayer...

    His only dream, his one true desire. is to feel her close, she could quench the fire.

    yet he is not good enough.

    She walks in the light, elevated in his mind, nothing else matters, all left behind.

    yet, he is not good enough

    all he wants, to keep him sustained: is a kiss

    Oh!..a kiss, a kiss would surely clear the mist amidst and insist to be missed, once kiss becomes kissed.

    his only wish his only way to be true...

    I hope and I pray...she does not love me too.

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    UnworthyFather commented on A prayer...

    06-16-2009

    Very well done!! To love someone with such unquenchable passion, all the while knowing that it cannot be, that it should not be... that she deserves better than what you can offer. That is love, my friend. Thanks for sharing.

    aggieprof commented on A prayer...

    03-31-2009

    Love the first line.

    mykhail commented on A prayer...

    03-24-2009

    Very good, well done!!!

    WordSlinger commented on A prayer...

    03-21-2009

    Powerful, :)

    sk commented on A prayer...

    03-21-2009

    I enjoyed this; Good read!

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