Acrostic

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    Acrostic

     Anyone can write a poem, but does it make sense?
    Coming across with an idea and making it intense.
    Random words slapped out in some romantic form.
    Open up people's minds and hearts in a literary storm. 
    Seeing strange visions that some may find frightful.
    Telling a story that others may find delightful.
    Intelligent words spoken or just some psychobabble.
    Clearing the crap and cobwebs of everday rabble.










    B Heath Harris/(c) 2010  

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    mdpoetgirl commented on Acrostic

    08-24-2012

    Acrostics are some of my faves. This one delivers and captures our attempts at poetic writing perfectly, with only a few words. Great job!
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    raziel69

    08/24/2012

    thanks, md, i appreciate you taking the time to read my work.

    thecross commented on Acrostic

    01-11-2011

    interpretation and conclusion is only what the eyes and mind are able to see and decipher, you pointed this out in a matter of fact way well done
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    Marsink commented on Acrostic

    01-07-2011

    This is coupled meaning with good meter and rhyme. I believe a poet can write whatever he/she dictates is worthy, in a style of their leisure, but there is a price to pay if one is producing mundane, inane, mediocrity--you have risen above it all! Excellent! Applause Crescendo!
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    raziel69

    01/08/2011

    You make me blush, my friend, and I appreciate your gracious words of praise. thanks you for such a profound comment and keeping my sights focused.

    MindNumbing commented on Acrostic

    08-13-2010

    I'm such a huge fan of the acrostic form and you've done a wonderful job with this one! A poem written about poetry and confined to specific parameters can't be easy to write... nice job :)
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    raziel69

    08/13/2010

    thank you, sir, i appreciate it...

    SavVySam commented on Acrostic

    08-13-2010

    Awesome acrostic gets the point across in grand fashion!;)
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    raziel69

    08/13/2010

    thanks again, Sam, for your comment. i appreciate all of the comments and criticisms i recieve from my friends, it helps me to become a better writer.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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