adaptable

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  • Loss
    • nini2323
    • I once knew everything, and now I know nothing.

    adaptable

    There are no words,
    Nothing flows pen to paper.
    this is to be my new beginning
    the newest chapter, pages still blank.
    No longer sure.
    Of myself, The book, of the world
    And I am left empty
    A blank canvas cold and lonely.
    Overwhelmed by the nothingness
    Missing the candy cotton ciity
    The cold here cuts
    No longer a powder sugar sting
    But I know it will make me stronger
    It won't kill me
    I am above all
    adaptable

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    RandyFrost commented on adaptable

    08-13-2009

    you are so strong in your word and yourself...i envy that

    Benjamin commented on adaptable

    02-21-2009

    Yes! Above all things! Nicely put. But you know me, I can't leave well enough alone. So, how about considering the addition of the word "from" inbetween "flows" and "pen" on the second line?

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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