ADMISSION

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THIS POEM IS ACTUALLY A SPELL TO WARD OFF EVIL.  DON'T WORRY NOW YOU MUST LEARN MY LEVEL.

ADMISSION

SEASONS CHANGE AND MUSCLES FLEX
EVERYONE TRYING TO DO THEIR BEST.
I SAY STOP PUTTING TO THE TEST!
ONE HUGE CHANCE TO MARK MY WAY,
I DIDN'T FORGET ABOUT JUDGEMENT DAY!
JUDGEMENT DAY IS THAT FOR REAL?
WHAT ABOUT THE MEALS?
THERE WERE MANY I DIDN'T GET
AND I REFUSE TO HEAR THE REST.
THIS WHOLE THING I DON'T COMPREHEND
IS DEATH MY ONLY FRIEND?
I WOULD LIKE TO DISCOVER MORE
I'M TIRED OF BEING LEFT ON THE FLOOR.
GIVE ME A CHANCE FOR PETE'S SAKE
AND PLEASE LET ME SAMPLE THAT LAKE.
THE LAKE OF DESIRE WHAT I WANT
CAN I DREAM THE IMAGE THING?

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swashington commented on ADMISSION

08-08-2009

Girl once again this is deep, keep up the good writing you have a lot to give.

PRIESTESSMACK

08/09/2009

I GOT ALL MY ATTENTION TO GIVE.

JUSTLETGO commented on ADMISSION

07-26-2009

I like the poem and thought the writing style was unique.

PRIESTESSMACK

07/27/2009

THIS WAS A POEM I WROTE WHEN EVERYONE WAS AGAINST ME. SO I CALLED IT A PROTECTION SPELL.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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THE LIONESS 1
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THE GOVERNESS 1
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THE EAGLE 0
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