All I've Caused

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    All I've Caused

    I caused the emptiness, I caused the pain.

    I took away the sunshine and replaced it with rain.

     

    I caused the loneliness, I caused the ache.

    I took away the strength and gave it a point to break.

     

    I caused the sadness, I caused the despair.

    I took away the trust and ripped up every layer.

     

    I caused the exile, I caused the guilt.

    I took away the freedom and everything that we had built.

     

    I caused the doubts, I caused the fears.

    I took away the smiles and replaced them all with tears.

     

    I caused the depression, I caused the void.

    I took away the future and left it all destroyed.

     

    I caused the departure; I caused it all to end.

    I took away my lover and then I took away my friend.




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    tenderpoison commented on All I've Caused

    07-28-2009

    the question now is what happens next? sometimes hard lessons leave us stuck...or can you embrace change and move on? regret is one thing, self-castigation another. you've a real gift for phrasing, the rhythm is near perfect.... 10
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    christianprep commented on All I've Caused

    07-21-2009

    it a sad crool poem to wards yourself from my point of view but i like it keep it up and strong
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    Bethane1978 commented on All I've Caused

    07-21-2009

    Wow. Thats a very strong poem. Its an excellent poem. Great job.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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