All Lonely Created Equal???

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    All Lonely Created Equal???

    They say, "It's lonely at the top"
    And I'm compelled to disagree
    Because the opposite is true when solace is sought
    In things which are solitary

    Like viewing a handpainted portrait
    in just the right light
    seeing the artist's alternate view
    And how they conveyed their conscious thoughts
    in addition to the one's
     they didn't mean to
    Which illicits one to picture one's self
    Weightlessly bounding beyond the moon
     Of imagination
    catapulting to an inverse presence
    within an abandoned train station
    where anticipated is the locomotive's
    smokeless arrival
    at it's fantastic destination
    all the while invisioning a future
    based upon what is
    all talents and skills are truly gifts
    which guarantee great promise

    Most take for granted
    The beauty
    Which can only be viewed
    From a majestic mountain top

    Not to mention
    The satisfaction gained from the trek
    And all it took to go non-stop

    I say lonliness is a co-dependent
    State of mind
    Which can only be attributed to
    Weighting too strongly
    The fractured opinions
    of the discouraged seeking to
    cowardize
    the audacity
    of ATMOSPHERIC point of view




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    Richisfun commented on All Lonely Created Equal???

    06-20-2009

    Very nice ! i had a piece of property on a hill top with a panoramic view, it was beautiful but i was lonely cuss of the solitary escape i was taking, i sold it at after 17 years, Your poem reminds of all the points of view, super job-rich

    whiplashjones1

    09/03/2009

    Thanks! Sorry the reply is so late. I barely have time to get on here much. I'm glad it touched someone!! =)

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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