ALMOST IN YOUR HAND

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    LIFE IS FULL OF CHALLENGES AND WE ENDURE THE UGLY MORE THAN BEAUTY. AND WHEN WE REACH AND TOUCH THE PRIZE, IT'S OVER AND NO ONE CARED.

    ALMOST IN YOUR HAND

    IT'S JUST THE SOUND
    THE WIND
    THE BEAUTY OF IT ALL
    THE RAIN, THE REASON OF IT ALL
    THE HATRED, THE NONSENSE OF IT ALL
    IT'S JUST THE SOUND
    THE BLUES OF IT ALL
    THE DEEPNESS OF FEAR AND SUBTLE SADNESS
    THAT WILL NOT LEAVE
    BUT LIES DORMANT
    IN THE STREAM
    THE VOICES, MAKE SCREAMS
    YET, IT IS THE COOLNESS OF IT ALL
    THE LEMONADE ON A LOPSIDED, CRACKED WOOD PORCH
    IT'S THE JOURNEY OF IT ALL
    THE RIDE TO GETTING  SOMEWHERE
    AND THEN, IT'S OVER.
    ANOTHER JOURNEY BEGINS.
    THE DESTINATION IS NOT AS CHALLENGING.
    THE BUMPS, HILLS, SLOPES, FRIGHTENED TIMES
     MAKE THE HUSTLE WORTH IT ALL.
    IT'S THE NONSENSE OF IT ALL
    WHEN WE GO, WE ALL GO SOMEPLACE,
    MAYBE THE SAME PLACE.
    THE DREAMS OF IT ALL
    REACHING HARD AND HIGH FOR THAT THING
    AND OUR ARMS ACHE AND ACHE
    AND WE REACH AND REACH
    AND ONE BLOW CARRIES IT AWAY ON A GURNEY.
    I JUST DON'T BUY IT.
    I JUST DON'T GET IT.
    I JUST WON'T LET IT.
    DESTROY MY INNER PEACE.

    THAT DREAM WAS ALMOST IN YOUR HAND
    AND THEN, SOMEWHERE, SOMEHOW, THINGS
    BROKE
    AND SMASHED AGAINST A WALL OR A FOOT CRUSHED IT.
     YOU HUNG IT UP ANYWAY BECAUSE IT MEANT SOMETHING
      AND NOBODY EVER REALLY CARED.
    THE UGLINESS OF IT ALL.
    THE MEANNESS OF IT ALL.
    THE AUDACITY OF IT ALL
    IN YOUR FACE OF HOPE ---IN YOUR REACH OF HOPE
    NO ONE EVER REALLY CARED.

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    gregster commented on ALMOST IN YOUR HAND

    09-27-2010

    well i do love it all.....very nice and bold poem .great work

    lonewolf commented on ALMOST IN YOUR HAND

    09-27-2010

    outstanding write!! i can get so many meanings from this poem. thats what makes it so beautiful. when one person gets one meaning, and another gets a totally different message, thats the sign of a great poem. i applaud your brilliance. a definate 10.

    chopkins123 commented on ALMOST IN YOUR HAND

    09-26-2010

    I like your optimism. There it is your own woman speaking

    cheezchic commented on ALMOST IN YOUR HAND

    09-26-2010

    wow I took in every word and it made my skin come alive...so many emotions...for so many things...in the end so true does any one really care...the answer yes...ourselves...

    chopkins123

    09/26/2010

    I like your optimism. There it is your own woman speaking Reply to Comment

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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