Alone

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    Alone

    She sits alone
    Use to waiting
    For something
    To come along
    To take her away
    Cold indifference
    Swallows her pathetic
    Life eaten alive
    By valiant attempts
    At fitting in
    She never could
    Understand
    Why she seemed  
    To be born with
    The burden of sticking
    Out, a sore thumb
    In a sea of  pinkies
    Reaching for so much
    More, she’ll always
    Adore what she’s
    Long since
    Yearned to have
    The pasts she’s
    Studied, so hard
    To try and not repeat
    Like those before her
    Her scars fade away,
    Her tears long
    Since soaked up the
    Pain that use to
    Engulf her senses,
    Alarmingly so,
    Like a soldier caught
    In the crossfire’s
    Of war, she has
    Learned that she can’t
    Escape,
    She has accepted
    Her fate,
    The fact that she
    Will die
    Alone.
    ~Kaitlin Platti~

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    StandingBear commented on Alone

    08-26-2009

    A deep self analysis to escape the past and never return there. I did the same for years and finally realized i needed to study the future and move on. Things have worked out much better. I'm certain for you to and also that you won't be alone.

    Platti

    08/26/2009

    Thanks bunches SB!

    StandingBear

    09/06/2009

    oops .. "too"

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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