Alone
Stretched out on satin sheets.
I lay there dreaming,
Wanting, hungering with eyes closed.
My body aching, my mind wandering
Feeling a touch, only to find
No-one there
Then my eyes open,
and a teardrop falls.
Alone
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claytonbruster commented on Alone
05-31-2009
- Loneliness is a killer hon. I felt this pain so much and you verbalized it so well. Obviously you too have felt the sting of loneliness at some time in your life. Kudos on finding this channel to voice it.
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10/14/2009
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hotchimera commented on Alone
05-30-2009
- i felt your longing. well done, and to the point. will read more of your poems soon. keep up the good work.
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05/30/2009
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