America’s Fabrication

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Ripped from the pages of my journal

America’s Fabrication

It is said that he discovered the new land

When all along it was being occupied by the native man

For centuries this fabrication been told

The truth came to be as the story got old

It is said he still shows his hatred face

By claiming if you’re not of his color

Then you’re not of human race

America’s fabrication distorted history

For centuries we lived by the words of history (his story)

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WordManipulator commented on America’s Fabrication

10-07-2009

Amen brother, we been living a fabricated lie for centuries. I think there is more to this history than being told. nice work seven. keep them coming

SEVEN

10/08/2009

Jay, u butthead u stole my word and thx for the comment

CasimirJash commented on America’s Fabrication

09-24-2009

I think you read my poem wrong I put Americas not America (US) but this is the idea I had thats why I didn't write (US) America

SEVEN

09/24/2009

ok my badsy...hehe

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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