Anger

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hey uh this isn't my normal kind of poetry i just thought of it while coming back from indiana. hope you all like it

Anger

 

anger

is what I feel

when you're around her

because me heart won't heal

after what you have done to me

 

everyday I feel sad

how could you leave me,

just because you were mad?

Now at least you feel free

I can't believe you left me that way

 

the thing that is hardest to believe

is you left me for her

everything good that day

is now a blur

because of what you did that day

 

I thought we loved each other

but I guess I was wrong

our love was like no other

we even had our song

but I guess that was just in my mind

 

now all I feel is anger

all because of you

and you are now a stranger

that is all true;

you stupid you

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KING commented on Anger

02-14-2010

LOL, YOUR PIECE REMINDS ME OF WHEN I WAS JUST BEGINING TO WRITE POETRY. a TOn OF FEELINGS AND NO ONE TO UNDERSTAND THEM, LET ALONE SHARE THEM WITH. Sorry for the caps. lol Excellent piece.

sk8ergirl

02/14/2010

thanks so much

deathbysociety commented on Anger

02-02-2010

I love this, it was great. as i was reading, i play back on my mistakes. i just love what you have done here, great work.... great great work....

girlygirl1234 commented on Anger

12-22-2009

wow i felt like i was there when i read this and omg its so awesome

Ariel commented on Anger

11-15-2009

I like this one because I can relate to it, I like the way it flows. :)

tinamgoode commented on Anger

08-08-2009

Keep up the good work. Keep your heart in your talent and you will go far in life. PEACE & SMILES!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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sk8ergirl’s Poems (17)

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Title Comments
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Life Is..... 8
Falling 9
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Where did you go? 6
grandma i love you 5
anywhere 15
Bird Without Wings 11
I miss you 14
think of us 14
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