Are We Ready?

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    Making the best of what you have. Loving your family over everything else under God.

    Are We Ready?

    Are we ready for a new way of life? The "Boys always came first, now it's your wife.
    Let's be loyal and commited it's really a must.
    Let's build this relationship on not only LOVE but TRUST.
    We'll still have times to gather with friends. But when it's FAMILY commitment time, the other fun must end!
    What I'm trying to say, Bryan, is as simple as this. We choose to CHERISH one another and give up that single life for this.
    We'll no longer hang out when ever we please. Passing over each other's feelings as if it's a breeze.
    No more hasty decisions or time for deceit. We know good relationships are too hard to find and then keep. 
    I know it's hard ,Bryan, to buckle down now. Because new RESPONSIBILITIES are suddenly found. It's hard for me too in a compromising way. Boy, because you are like night and I am like day.
    Despite all the differences we seem to possess.More importantly to focus on is our UNDERSTANDING that's best.
    We know each other and sometimes too well. Better than oneself it's too hard to tell. We keep each other going during the times that we're down. That's one of the reasons why our love is so sound.
    You told me before that I must be the one. You said you never met a girl like me. Now on this day as we are UNITED I just can't help but believe.
    Those words meant alot to me in a very special way. More precious than even silver or gold could say I'm no dummy or fool. I'm not even stupid or blind.
    While I searched around for answers my heart said just fine. I've gone through the motions checking pros against cons about this MARRIAGE arrangement and I know it's our time.
    We both must have FAITH in our CREATOR above. Only he can BOND our relationship with pure LOVE. We'll ecounter some problems but we'll know how to solve them. COMMUNICATION is the key the only way to dissolve them.
    We won't reminisce on the days of our pasts. Forgive all the hurt and the pain ---Thanks God didn't last.
    We'll keep each other going and we'll make it too. Jehovah God knows we have much work to do. With a bright future ahead, and some uncertainties too--- We'll do it TOGETHER as Mr. and Mrs. McCloud and our families too.
    Amen
    Charlette February 92


     

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