Awake and Dreaming

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    Awake and Dreaming

    So tired I'm hallucinating
    My heart is quickly palpitating
    Wanted to get to sleep pretty soon
    So many distractions, sitting here in my room

    I wish that I could be awake forever
    There's so much that I'm missing but it's for the better

    Being half alive is the eventual result
    Of cutting half of my sleeping time off
    All of my memories I keep in this vault
    that play again and again, re-sorting my thoughts

    I wish that I could sleep forever
    Experiencing all of my unreal pleasures

    Dreaming is what I'm talking about
    I say what I want, in whispers and shouts
    It's really no different from being awake
    Except that my actions put nothing at stake

    If I could decide where I wanted to be
    Maybe I would sleep better, permanently

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    Drivingczar commented on Awake and Dreaming

    04-18-2009

    Beautiful writing style! Great write!

    origionalmerlin commented on Awake and Dreaming

    04-08-2009

    almost anything can become boring, except perhaps the mind behind your words

    xxlheart commented on Awake and Dreaming

    04-01-2009

    another good write...indecision has always haunted me. but so has quick decisions ~L~

    BRAINCELL commented on Awake and Dreaming

    03-29-2009

    VERY DEEP LOVE IT

    markrohaley commented on Awake and Dreaming

    01-21-2009

    I found it

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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