Battlefields of Discontented Dreams

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    Battlefields of Discontented Dreams

    Another year has marched out of my life.
    A crusading warrior making his way back home,
    Leaving bloody battlefields in his wake.
    Trampled valleys where dreams once stood.

    In the beginning, the year tiptoed in,
    Softly sprinkling crystallized wishes.
    Ideas, floating like a fine dusting of snow,
    Forming a light covering on my bed of anticipation.

    In swept the Ides of Spring laden with promises.
    Storms tossing my wants in a turbulent sea of needs.
    I planted my seeds with the expectancy of progression,
    Hoping to find nourishment for my battered soul.

    Summer scorched a path through my life
    Bringing passion and potential to my fertile soil
    Growing, thriving, reaching for the budding of fulfillment
    Hopes alive, green and fresh, standing tall against adversity.

    Autumn flew in on the winds of a changeling,
    Taking the abundance and leaving a barren field.
    Stripped of optimism, I wander in the fields of despair,
    Wondering where my footpath led me astray.

    Yes wicked winter with your freezing rains.
    You beat against me, leaving blisters in your wake.
    But Spring will return, of this I am certain,
    Bringing with it the possibilities of contentment.

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    danmartyjake1 commented on Battlefields of Discontented Dreams

    09-13-2009

    Beautiful and solemn and real. I loved the story you took me along through the seasons and the reflections of your feelings laid against them and entwined in them so beautifully. Rich and eloquent, full of substance.. Great write and read!

    ginga commented on Battlefields of Discontented Dreams

    09-12-2009

    Lena, A stanza for all seasons in a metaphorically wrapped bag of emotional descriptiveness, that nary a poet would tangle with. (Now that's a mouthful for me). Great stylistic poem! ginga

    countrypoet commented on Battlefields of Discontented Dreams

    04-15-2009

    This poem reminds me of some of a Shakespearean sonnet.Beautifully written with a nice rythym pattern.

    ccslim commented on Battlefields of Discontented Dreams

    04-01-2009

    Time flies by and I really like how you felt it! Good job Sis!

    WordSlinger commented on Battlefields of Discontented Dreams

    03-21-2009

    the possibilities of contentment, they are here, God Bless

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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