Because you are my Mother.

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Nothing can replace Mother's love.

Because you are my Mother.

Mother
I am glad
when you're happy.
I am sad
when you worry.
I am mad
when others feels sorry.
Because
You are my Mother!!
And You will be there
Like my heart beats.
Hear the song
of my pulses
That sings "I love you.
And I will be there for you."
Because
You are my Mother,
I know you
From your womb,
And I love you
Till my tomb.
This is the promise
of a daughter,
who though far,
but still near.
Weeping for you
in the hours of darkness,
Wiping your tears
with my humble prayers.
Though you alone
in that lonely home,
My prayers strength
will put His angles
to guard you Mom.
I am there for you,
However far I am.
So sleep in Peace
to dream the golden
dawns to come,
Then we will be together
and will fly with time
to the land of
fairies and flowers
to show you
the rainbows,
Because
you are my Mother.

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Stryx commented on Because you are my Mother.

06-29-2010

A lovely tribute from one who has discovered the depth of love.

Rhymer commented on Because you are my Mother.

06-02-2010

You captured a daughters love for her mother most excellently. A wonderful tribute and a 10 from me.

Hamnaz

06/02/2010

Thanks for the read my friend ...yes it is my love to her,when she called and said to me that she was all alone at home for that day...i love her that much..i miss her,as i am far from her and from my home country....

Teardrops commented on Because you are my Mother.

05-31-2010

You mother knows you love her and this poem says it all great write . Thanks for the read Marie

Hamnaz

06/01/2010

Yes Marie,I love her... the most...because of her only I got my real hero in my life...otherwise I could have missed my many happiness and would have messed up in my life...Thanks for the lovely appreciation Marie.

ansari commented on Because you are my Mother.

05-31-2010

Its a beautiful poem, with beautiful thoughts. You know to touch the very heart of affection and love. Its 10 from me.

Hamnaz

05/31/2010

Thanks Ansari for your lovely feedback...after all I am far away from my Mother...but luckily my Father returned to Homeland from Qatar and now my mother is not alone...so I am happy because she is happy and not alone there.... But I do miss my Parents..:(

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

Hamnaz’s Poems (15)

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