before work/can you guess whats missing here?

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    before work/can you guess whats missing here?


    you wake
    im lost in the green of your eyes
    move closer into your embrace
    lips brushing my forehead
    anticipation itching
    your kisses run down to cheeks
    gently to neck and
    delving farther kisses fanning
    hardly a whisper as you stop
    my breath catches
    eyes closed biting lip
    your tongue moves slowly
    pull you closer
    yet even slower
    you move lower
    hands touching me now
    softly
    all over and im moaning
    begging
    clutching wildly as you
    enter with tongue
    and feverishly
    runnning hands through hair
    arching closer
    beg you to take me
    and you enter
    hard
    nipping my shoulder
     rolling me on top
    eyes meet
    as i work you harder
    your hands on my hips
    my name escapes your lips
    pull me down with crushing kiss
    in that moment you explode
    lay in your arms afterward
    chuckle as
    you head for the shower for work





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    ArgusWayne commented on before work/can you guess whats missing here?

    11-01-2009

    Whew! That was so good I think I need a cigarette!

    cdeluhery87

    11/01/2009

    ty

    WordSlinger commented on before work/can you guess whats missing here?

    06-27-2009

    that is the life, then at break time/lunch drive/run as fast as you can, back to the wonderful glory in the ... Guess

    PRober commented on before work/can you guess whats missing here?

    06-27-2009

    OMG... that kinda imaginery works a guy up hon! Very hot read indeed!

    Chrisjan commented on before work/can you guess whats missing here?

    05-31-2009

    A very well written poem. The detail you share, makes the reader aware, of your feelings from deep within. The ending kind of sad, he gets up and leaves for work, after the encounter you just described.

    Bongky commented on before work/can you guess whats missing here?

    05-29-2009

    Simply erotic.... and explosive. And it builds up into a climax and the release or loosening up. Luv it! There is this feeling that only a man and a woman feel during their "entanglement" that would finally bursts into ecstasy and unexplained satisfaction.

    cdeluhery87

    05/29/2009

    ty ty ...the title was actually before work ( can you guess whats missing lol)

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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