Betrayed

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Betrayed

I told you I loved him, yet you didn't care.

The moment I left you went right over there...

Knowing my feelings didn't seem to stop you ,

my question is what kind of friend are you?

You took from me something special and true

the love of my life now belongs to you...

You betrayed me in the very worst way,

I'm hoping and praying that you'll get yours

someday...

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Betrayed

09-12-2010

Hey, I have walked both sides of the plank. She will get hers, maybe you won't see it, but she will. It is a wonderful poem. You set the tone for her and it was very clear.

KristyLoren commented on Betrayed

08-28-2009

Snap!! I LOVE it. Betrayal is screaming here and loud. Karma is as most of us know a total mind screw and through your writing here I hope they get theirs also. This is a perfectly written piece of work. You get my 20 even though I can only give a 10. LOVED IT!!!!!

Chaos128 commented on Betrayed

08-20-2009

Ouch... The shortest distance between two points is a laser sight, ha ha!

dezarawr commented on Betrayed

07-17-2009

haha ive been through this before, good write i liked it

PRober commented on Betrayed

07-06-2009

retribution is a bitch ain't it? nice one, short and not sweet! write on!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

Kristina’s Poems (28)

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What if 2
My Flow 3
The Dance 3
Backstabbed by love 2
Thoughts... 3
Falling Star 6
Finding Peace 8
Screaming To Be Free 9
Another year passes 3
Memories 8
Rebirth 9
Confusion 2
Betrayed 7
To My Daughters 12
To My Son 9
Hollow 3
Ain't that a shame 2
This Deep Sadness 13
Darkness 9
Painful Parting 8
A silent Prayer 6
Mine To Keep 14
Seperate Ways 3
Moving on 3
Brave new Me 6
Heartache 3
Just Me 10