~bleeding through the cracks~

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morning thought!

~bleeding through the cracks~


all your secrets bleed through the cracks in my soul,
are you the one who was sent to make me whole.
i slander my pity for you with my words,
even though i know they will never be heard.
I break the chains that were forged to bind,
and know I open my eyes forever that were once blind.
I feel your claws, the scars left that wont let go,
was your love real, or simply for a sadistic show.
I sold my heart willingly for you ,
but you let our tainted love undo.
So if you love me still,
release my spirit from your cage and let it go.
I feel a fallen angel taking my hand,
one that will show me what life is again.
i push my pride up against the crumbling wall,
it holds me tight and wont let me fall.
i remember that we were once friends,
who would have known that day would have to end.
the cracks in my soul are filling fast,
with the stains of time tattooed within.
i buried my name deep in softness of your skin,
i feel it slither in me and call your name again.
too much pride to eat the ugliness that hangs inside,
is guess its just part of our twisted ride.
so if you every did love me let me go,
you have made me broken, and left me UN whole!
~INKMASTER~

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Tempestlady commented on ~bleeding through the cracks~

10-10-2011

"Welcome to my parlour said the spider to the fly" this poem sure brought this old idiom to mind. To be caught is such sweet softness and still stare at the scars wrought is a form of torture when one see's the captor for its real motivations. A very unfortunate and sad piece that left me wondering about "how" one would reclaim ones previous boundaries and in doing so freedom to love. Very interesting, and I enjoyed it very much. Write on.........Tlady

inkmaster

10/10/2011

thank you....i write from my heart and life is what fuels my thoughts....Its actually pretty simple ....poetry is like a broken toaster some days are light..other days are dark it just depends what power that toaster is plugged into...lol...actually we are always free to love but with such power it needs to be used the right way never forgetting the boundaries that should never be passed or taken for granted......thanks....jeff

guardianangel76 commented on ~bleeding through the cracks~

10-10-2011

Vainity is not True Love, nor is it sent from above and those who only see the outside cannot feel connections of real Love, you see God puts people in our lives to teach us...Especially when we want to hide Guardianangels are for real this in my heart .....i know you can feel But it's a pure and Holy thing not full of sex and drugs...and all those horrible things for time has come to lay to rest all those things so you can be blessed So open up your heart and mind... and let the path unfold in time.. Rachael, always with Christ's Love

inkmaster

10/10/2011

woman....ur words cut deep into my soul and fill those cracks in with hope for a brighter future...but i am sure you know this ....everything happens for a reason ...when another door is closed it opens another ...sometimes a door leads to know where , while some doors will take you to the feelings that flow off the soul.....

guardianangel76

10/10/2011

some people don't get it..they think your love is meant for just one person...but god intended for us to share it for all...those in need..that suffer from never knowing the kind of love he provides us with...we are angels...when we allow him in;)

guardianangel76

10/10/2011

when you feel a never ending understanding..like i have with so many people...you can write something and it's like your writing out there feelings for them because they are unable to completely release it for themselves...so he gives you the wisdom...;)

inkmaster

10/10/2011

oh my sweet guardianangel you are so right in your thoughts ....even with all the horrible things laid to rest the one thing that the heart truly needs love...Not only does it need to receive love...But love needs to flow from it just as well..The path has already started to unfold know its just a matter of time to actually stop walking upon the fence between the paths and make the right choice, by jumping on the right path and planting booth feet in the path no matter how many twist and turns that path has that may lie ahead...My heart is a open book though many chapters are already been written it still has many empty pages for the right person to fill....god bless you my special friend....jeff

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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