Blood Month

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phlebotomy = blood letting, kalah = black, azotemia = blood (previous two are in Aztec), hemophobia = fear of blood.

Blood Month

September, October, November all true
the months of red leafs, skies no longer blue
as the days turn to dark red ember
in draws near the month of November

the lord and his lady, in phlebotomy conjoin
a mask was the body, a light in its rain
a waited was she, whom desired his reign
her knife awaited he, resistance was in vain

the dreary sight of kalah azotemia
during the blood month November
the life of a hemophobia
twisted into desperation during the month of the bleeder

the silk of the essence, the rich red wine
willing was he, to give her his life
shared by the lovers throughout all time
through this phlebotomy, in which he shared with his wife

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WordSlinger commented on Blood Month

06-10-2010

I love it, I really like the first Stanza, ty WS

DPoetKat commented on Blood Month

06-04-2010

A hemotologist dream and a great write.. I work in surgery and have a grave respect of this nectar we cannot live without.

cheronld commented on Blood Month

05-26-2010

I'm a little twisted so I enjoyed this twisted tale alot....Vampires in their true form...good write..

LadyLuck commented on Blood Month

05-25-2010

your poems, as always, capitvate me and take me on dark sensuous journeys well done as always

EvilPoems

05/25/2010

thanks ^.^

SuSpence commented on Blood Month

05-20-2010

This is excellant. First time I have read you I believe, but I see true talent here. This could easily be turned into a song. Very strong poetry indeed. I held highest regard for the final stanza. Very Nice. -Spence

EvilPoems

05/20/2010

^.^ dont forget cold crow the slayer! :D

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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