Blood Moon

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    Blood Moon

    You race out of the house at great speed
    As what has happened comes to seed
    Collapsing and crying for the night to see
    And you remember your treachery

    You found him dead when you walked in
    And you remember the blood again
    A man in all black walks to your side
    You push him away and run to hide

    The both loved you, and in the end
    One of your lovers ended up dead
    Swiftly he follows in pursuit
    To give you the lovers' dispute

    You trip and fall down hard
    Your only exit became barred
    He asks if you love him, and you say no
    Looking at the peaceful moon, you hear blood hit snow.

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    redbloodink commented on Blood Moon

    04-12-2010

    this write had me in the picture you painted.... love that ended in hurt and pain can cause blood...... to leave such a stain..... red

    Raynie commented on Blood Moon

    03-11-2009

    You are really good. This is amazing. The blood hitting the snow, you describe everything so well that I can see it perfectly. Good Work.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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