Bottles of Lemonade

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Bottles of Lemonade

There once was a bottle of water
That wanted to be more like his friend
Jealousy overtook him,
and he started to search for powder.
Now on the day of the first full moon of spring
came along a man dressed in paper
With a knife, the bottle of water cut him open from his backside,
and stole his powdered soul.
For all of the rest of his days, he would live as lemonade.

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tenderpoison commented on Bottles of Lemonade

01-12-2011

and here I thought it was if life gave you lemons....lol. you're a nut, but a fun one.

papapaczki

01/12/2011

Thanks for seeing the humor in this! Thanks for the read.

frankson03 commented on Bottles of Lemonade

12-14-2010

wholed up,, cuz that joint was short and sweet, i def get it, he lived the rest of his life bitter,, i rock with this one,, big ups...

gogant commented on Bottles of Lemonade

11-02-2010

Well, it ain't the best way to create lemonade, but it's original....

soulwriter commented on Bottles of Lemonade

10-13-2010

When you have water, why not make lemonade; obviously you don't always need lemons - and as when starting a poem, you don't always have to have the actual ingredients to make something that quenches the readers thirst. Your creativity flows pure as a bottle of spring water...

Teardrops commented on Bottles of Lemonade

10-13-2010

You stated as pure water then things in life (lemonade ) soured you on life . Never give up on life it will surprise you in many ways . Great poem my friend Marie

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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