Break Me Free Brother Wind

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    Break Me Free Brother Wind

    Whispering wind
    lift me up-
    carry me beyond;
    in this I cannot
    stand alone.
    Reaches
    of space and time,
    beyond mortal conception;
    I know not
    what awaits me.
    Diffuse thy self-
    mortality's lie:
    do we ever truly live:
    can we ever truely die?
    My soul only seeks
    freedom from this-
    my distasteful existence.

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    stellar commented on Break Me Free Brother Wind

    12-11-2009

    Oh...this is a poem made out of depression when we fell that release would be good..we call for the wind to fly off from the wind...But feelings come and go,,...Wish u read "my plea" well the same thought again...
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    stellar

    12/11/2009

    fly out of earth i mean

    kochab commented on Break Me Free Brother Wind

    08-17-2009

    provokes many thoughts blu. I like the work a great deal. Like it so that it will go to my favorites list that is. the lines Diffuse thy self- mortality's lie: do we ever truly live: can we ever truely die? go to say a lot. both seemingly certanty and uncertainty all the same in my mind. great work dear.
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    rougepriest commented on Break Me Free Brother Wind

    08-17-2009

    cool youve captured the age old mystery of all that is in a short well constructed piece, nicely done bluewolf, I feel that way too the older i get
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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