Breakdown

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    Breakdown

    These emotions.
    Like weighted shackles
    dragging me back into the icy abyss.
    There, so far down
    the pressure is too great.
    My body remains still and quiet
    but my soul is crushed.
    I can feel it inside of me,
    slowly dying.
    I try draining,
    purification,
    and expression.
    All fail at relieving.
    There is no cure for this.
    Even a memory of absolute bliss
    barely dents these chains.
    All loved ones around me,
    powerless to cease my spiraling decent.
    I'm loosing control over this,
    and I'm frightened.
    I feel as though my last breathe
    may be expiring.
    Down here
    in this trench.
    My limbs are limp and stagnant.
    My soul is perishing and departing.
    And my life,
    is ending.

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    LBoogie commented on Breakdown

    11-12-2009

    Wow, I can actually feel the breakdown in this poem, keep up the good work.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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