Breaking

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    Breaking

     I touch the ground,
    The mirror shakes.

    I hit the ground,
    The mirror breaks.

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    poetgeek commented on Breaking

    11-05-2010

    hey, i like how this poem is so simple but yet greatly worded. haha 4 lines
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    himekachan111

    12/14/2010

    thanks ;P

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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