Bring me the autumn

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    Bring me the autumn

     
    I remember you
    as you were in the
    last autumn,
    The leaves adorned my
    heart with your music,

    They were sounds
    of your cadence voice
    that never left the air
    like echoes in the wind,
    even the birds sang like you,

    They had your
    tongue and throat,
    you were the artist
    with no fame,
    your appearance, your voice
    were steady and calm.

    They brought to me hymns,
    and peace. In your eyes the
    serenity of your soul
    were like flames of light
    that never burned.

    You were like the
    white sheets of my bed, always
    in peace and warm.

    The autumn brought back your
    guitar your slow melody
    like a breeze beneath my
    curtains,
    and my house was then
    singing like
    my heart.


    Copyright©ElenaToledo2008

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    Yelena commented on Bring me the autumn

    02-05-2010

    Aww!! thank you my dear new friend...I really appreciate it.. hugsss

    soulwriter commented on Bring me the autumn

    02-05-2010

    I loved this from start to finish - the flow and essence of your autumn words vocalize calming sensations. 10

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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