Broken Blades

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    Broken Blades

    Broken Blades

    Broken blades in a living room fan
    Nuts and bolts gatherin’ in a tin can
    Microwave buzzes but makes no heat
    Sprinkler water flowin’ down the street

    A dishwasher not wetting a dish
    Isn’t it supposed to whirl and swish?
    A garage door not able to close
    A thorny bush, but never a rose

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    poett commented on Broken Blades

    06-03-2013

    Sometimes everything goes wrong but the best way to handle it is finding humour or writing about it. Then once you are relax make a plan on how to fix them. Lol...
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    xefire commented on Broken Blades

    05-17-2013

    This is wonderfully put. Everything is broken but instead of giving up or being overly upset, you show kind of a quiet resign to it. BRAVO!
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    Crush commented on Broken Blades

    04-21-2013

    Stumbled upon your work. I am impressed with your style. Ten !!!
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    MootPoint

    04/22/2013

    Thank you much :)

    MootPoint

    07/31/2013

    Please feel free to stumble on more. :)

    windsongs commented on Broken Blades

    04-05-2013

    what im dealing with today, everything broken except my spirit-good write :)
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    MootPoint

    04/16/2013

    Thank you so much for your comment. :)

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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