Broken heart sadness

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A poem written for a total idiot >.> But, the "cutting wrist" thing isn't true. Just added for effect.

Broken heart sadness



I'm so sorry
But i can't take it anymore
love me, hate me..
My eyes are filled with tears
and my heart is drenched in ice
there's one thing that makes me feel
aside from yor voice
and as i drag the blade
across my now painless wrist
I know
somewere deep inside
im hoping you'll notice
Realize im bleeding
Over you
That you'll come save me..
But i know..
You'll never pull me back up
no..
You'll shove me back farther
and i...
wish i could see your eyes one last time
Pray to something that your heart weren't empty
My love is meaningless to you
even though..
I gave everyting to you
I should have known..
Im nothing...
Maybe..
Maye when im gone
You'll realize what you tossed aside
when im gone
you'll love me then
Rocking in my shadows
I can't banish the thougt of you..
You are my salvation..
and
You are my demise.
I gave it all away
Idont want it back
You've finally broken me baby..
But
I havent the stength to walk away
To dry my veins..
My release is in the blood
Our blood
can you feel it?
I'm all but gone.

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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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