Broken Hearted Dream

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  • ShanneN
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Broken Hearted Dream

In a lonely room, you and I.

Cuddled on a bed, thinking about it makes me cry.

Took a trip, out of the country we went.

Time together was all we spent.

You got some tickets, off to a movie we go.

There we hugged and kissed real slow.

Back to the room of our first kiss.

Now you’re all I really miss.

We’ve never met, but I love you so much.

I just want to feel your touch.

A hug, a kiss, a handshake will do.

I just hope this dream comes true.

Im just about ready to get my clothes and pack.

I really, REALLY, want this dream to come back.

It made me the happiest I’ve ever been.

So I’m off to sleep and dream of you again.

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natertot commented on Broken Hearted Dream

11-29-2010

Your looking at me now and yet your to far from my face to see the tears built up...

nanoboy909 commented on Broken Hearted Dream

10-13-2010

i can really relate to this one sometimes i dont ever wanna wake from my own dreams cause in my dream i find happiness....

angelchaser commented on Broken Hearted Dream

10-06-2010

Another great piece. You'll find the love you desire, trust me. A wonderful girl like you will not be alone in life.

shaniac commented on Broken Hearted Dream

08-05-2010

Caboose187 said it perfectly. This is a very nice poem, keep it up! :D

caboose187 commented on Broken Hearted Dream

08-02-2010

it was a wonderful poem i love the rhyme scheme i give u a 10/10.....

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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