BROTHER

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    BROTHER


    Our love would never die
    we laugh and we cry
    Oh! those days when we use to fight
    On nothing but a piece of pie
    Nothing can change my love for you
    it will just grow, that is the only thing i m sure about
    You are the blood in my veins and the pupil of my eye........

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    drewking commented on BROTHER

    01-23-2009

    really like this poem,, very strong...
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    Plot121 commented on BROTHER

    12-29-2008

    I liked this poem very much. Like I read before, that your work comes out the shoot very strong but leaves your reader wanting more then just a piece. I feel that if your work would explore more of the idea you are trying to convey your work would be
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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