Bullet

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Bullet

Put a bullet through my head; make me cry until I’m dead.
Put a bullet through my skull; make me pay for being so dull.
Put a bullet through my face; make me say I’m sorry babe.
Put a bullet through my head; make me cry until I'm dead.

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melankolik commented on Bullet

09-11-2009

so much rage...maybe too much. I feel it wasn't properly channelled...it begins with a bang and then just fizzles out from the next line down...i love the title though...and the beginning...nice!

writingislove

09/11/2009

Thank you I will work on it:]

Lolee commented on Bullet

08-27-2009

I can understand this completely. I have written stuff like this, but never put it out there. I actually liked it. Just remember...write it to get it off your chest...never act it out. I know you felt better after writing this didn't you? I always feel release...like,"Now I can breath." You go girl! TEN.

writingislove

08/27/2009

I did feel better. I always do! Thank you for all of your support throughout my writting:]

cmlestrade commented on Bullet

07-29-2009

Well this was one of the most entertaining pieces of depressive writing I have come across. Even though I found the topic disturbing, I found your sense of meter and use of rhythm very good. I'm curious as to why you chose such a morbid topic but you handled it very well.

writingislove

07/29/2009

Well, thank you. I chose this because me and my boyfriend of almost 2 years had just broken up. I was on the computer and I felt a sting in my heart and then in my head, wondering if I had made the right decision. I only write about how I feel. This poem here had just popped up in my head so I decided to write it down and submit it onto my poetry page.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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