bursting brain

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    bursting brain

    Confusion kills.

    Kills all the cells in my brain.

    Brain aches but not as much as my heart.

    Heart feels like its held with sucky school glue.

    Glued together the pieces but I hurt you.

    You are my world, my sunshine and I feel so bad.

    Bad for what I have done and for all of this.

    This is all for you, and I hate this all.

    All the pain you don’t know about.

    About how much I care about us

    Us being together is what I want, no need.

    Need our love, but I ruined it, and im sorry.

    Sorry isnt enough, but it’ll have to do.

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    Musicmynded1 commented on bursting brain

    11-02-2010

    Absolutely love it.. ingenious,, the only thing i would maybe change is that i would say .....and need, instead of "no need"...good job
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    daniel081180 commented on bursting brain

    04-30-2010

    good job. sounds as if u write from experiences.
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    Nibula5 commented on bursting brain

    04-30-2010

    AWesome poem
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    dahlusion commented on bursting brain

    02-26-2010

    Deeply and poetically painful on so many levels of felling. Bravo! Peace and Light.
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    cagallagher commented on bursting brain

    12-15-2009

    Best line is the LAST line. Like troubador, I am most times overly critical, but with youth is impestuousness. Keep wiritng and letting thta heart out. Revisist your work often, don't be afraid to modify, add/subtract, and remember to NEVER let the emotion fade, only the presentation should change. Keep writing.
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