Can you hear me when I talk to you?

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To my grandma! Rip grandma!

Can you hear me when I talk to you?

Time seems to drag on forever since the very last chance I had to tell you goodbye. It was a week before you passed away and I had no desire to see you so frail about to die every day seems to drag on longer because every time I wonder if my prayers could ever get through can you hear me when I talk to you? Did you get my last prayer that I tried to get it through can you hear me when I talk to you? Sadly I fail to recall the last instance where I said that I love you can you hear me when I talk to you? Every time this phrase comes to my mind I wonder if you know that I miss you. I hope I never have made you ashaimed you were always my personal hero and my best friend the lessons you taught me became unspoken but they will be remembered until my ends Can you hear me when I talk to you? Because every time I think of you I wonder if my love ever has shown through can you hear me when I talk to you? There hasn't been a day where I haven't missed you

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am2anangel commented on Can you hear me when I talk to you?

06-26-2010

beautifuly written. The repeated title fit perfectly throughout. We are left to wonder if our loved ones passed can hear our thoughts and prayers. well done once again.-tonya

Mandi commented on Can you hear me when I talk to you?

04-04-2010

I am so sorry , And I prattle on unaware of your suffering Please accept my apology

Charlie23 commented on Can you hear me when I talk to you?

04-02-2010

I can relate... So hard to say goodbye to a loved one, very hard to know if they are aware when they are still living, but not really there. Poem from the heart...beautiful.

Musicmynded1 commented on Can you hear me when I talk to you?

04-02-2010

Very heart-felt.....................................................:)

wamomo commented on Can you hear me when I talk to you?

03-30-2010

This is a beautiful plea of the heart that moves the reader, with longing, anguish, and so many other emotions felt in the aftermath of losing a loved one...I know these feelings well..nicely done!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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