Carriage

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    Carriage

    Carriage

    Facing the days' hazy charms
    Dancing to windy chimes
    Feeling the warm sun rays
    Stealing moments out of time

    Letting each encounter write itself
    Releasing lines and mystery
    Simply owning it and watching
    examining recent history

    Believing in the structure and power
    set before to keep from being lost
    the story softly unfolds each hour
    who stands to judge or cross



    -M. Jacobs



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    thecross commented on Carriage

    01-11-2011

    "Letting each encounter write itself Releasing lines and mystery Simply owning it and watching" this is simply beautiful well done

    danmartyjake1

    01/11/2011

    Thank you for your words about "Carriage", looking forward to hearing your response to my other poems. ;-)

    Poetster commented on Carriage

    09-03-2009

    This poem is very well written. These two lines captured my eye: "Letting each encounter write itself Releasing lines and mystery"

    danmartyjake1

    09/05/2009

    Thanks for your encouraging commentary.

    soulwriter commented on Carriage

    07-28-2009

    "Believing in the structure and power" - Believing is achieving... Sometimes our thoughts come together in just the right way and at the right time as to to allow us to put the words into a poem that says exactly what our heart is feeling. Thank you for sharing.

    danmartyjake1

    08/31/2009

    Thanks soulwriter for your rating and your commentary, as well. Please read and rate my other poems...

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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