Carwash

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    Carwash
    Friends + soap + water =
    Hose spraying contests
    Soapy works of art 
    Water drenched kids
    fights over who does what
    Soap attacks
    running from water
    starring in awe at the rainbow
    washing your hands and getting soaked
    tripping on hoses
    spending 8 hours in the sun laughing
    telling secrets
    looking confused
    being tired
    soap beards
    washing about 2 cars (partially)

    Friends + Soap + Water + Adult Supervision = 
    Washing 20 maybe 30 cars
    Being told don't play in the water
    Staying in the sun 8 hours
    Drinking water
    being tired
    laugh at wierd comments on rims/ hubcaps
    Wonder why people came to get perfectly clean cars washed
    Washing more cars.

    Friends + Soap + Water + Adult Friends =
      Hose spraying contests Soapy works of art  Water drenched kids fights over who does what Soap attacks running from water starring in awe at the rainbow washing your hands and getting soaked tripping on hoses spending 8 hours in the sun laughing telling secrets looking confused being tired
    soap beards
    get food
    have compliments
    have fun
    work for a good cause
    go to bed early!

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    Kingwebstar commented on Carwash

    09-30-2012

    Lol this was a interesting poem I liked it .Not all the time poetry has to be serious .Great job Da Princess :)
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    poetryprincess

    09/30/2012

    Thanks.... I had a lot of fun writing it! my child at heart came out and for the first time in a long while I was able to act my age... not the 20 year old everyone wanted me to be..... lol since again everyone on this site knows I'm 13 almost 14! :)

    Crush commented on Carwash

    09-30-2012

    this was fun to read. I never knew why those kids were always happy and smiling as they washed cars. now I do.
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    poetryprincess

    09/30/2012

    Yes! bc there's water and soap and it's sunny outside.... it's fun and always a lot of energy!

    poetryprincess commented on Carwash

    09-29-2012

    Sooooooooooooooooooooooo true!
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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