CHANCES

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  • Mau
  • "A rose must remain with the sun and the rain or it's lovely promise won't come true..." Sung by Wayne Newton.

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God inspired me!!

CHANCES

Let me find that one peace

That place where the soul dances.

Happiness abounds within

The one that takes the chances.


by: Maureen McLaughlin

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Stryx commented on CHANCES

10-02-2009

Short and very and to the point. Chances we mus take, or crawl into a hole.

Stryx commented on CHANCES

09-29-2009

Not long, but I like it. Length is often over rated.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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