chasm

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    chasm

    drops stream from my eyes and pool in my heart
    my spirt is shattered, it will not restart
    everyone else is living life like a queen and her joker
    when all i feel is despair, a life barely mediocre
    a ruse of happiness i seem to possess
    but on one cursed thought, im obsessed.
    i feel so remote from that girl of five
    my chasm floats unfurnished, completely deprived.
    my hopes of having it laden have been shattered. 
    at times i feel bruised, bloodied and battered.
    i loathe the 'reassurance' of "your day will come."
    because until it does, the only thing i feel is numb.
    i walk into a home, empty of a child's call,
    i sit on the floor, feel my middle, and curl up into a ball.

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    Gabriel85 commented on chasm

    07-23-2009

    It didn't register my last comment for some reason...I've got to go in a second, but thought you should know that this is incredible! What awesome imagery and heartfelt sentiment...you wrote from the heart and its amazing. I'm thoroughly impressed, but I knew you had it in you =)

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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